文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
My teacher is language teacher.He wears a pair of glasses.He is very handsome.His eyes are so keen and his face is so attractve. He is humorous and kind.I like him very much. I hope we can be friends not only teacher and student.Actually,he is really a good friend.you can trust him.