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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Deer Sir or Madam, On the grounds of contributing to Project Hope, I strongly determined to look to a suitable juvenile to help with. At first, positive attitude to life, good human character,and so on, is a fundamental factors to be elected. The second, the child is at least 18 years old so that he is big enough to make a decision if accepting the financial aid. Last but not least, the youngster should be really thirsty for learning more knowledge because of his poor domestic income. How can I help the child? you maybe asked. On the one hand, I will offer the child the tuition of every semester while he is going to school.On the other hand, I am willing to communicate with the child when he has been in face of difficulties about life. If you get a such child, please transform all the information of the candidate to me as soon as possible. I will appropriate you sincerely. Thank you so much. Yours faithfully, Li Ming