2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句子错误偏多，且文中缺少从句的使用；作者能较灵活的使用词汇，可是单词拼写还需加强。

On the relase sunday, when you with your familer shopping at the supermake You will find the lot of on excessive packaging marchandise, Which not only made the plaint good being the great ,but also the more expence.May be that is aim of the manucation.the same goods,becouse of exccessive packaging,The price sudendly decrease twice over,is too overstate too accepect. In my operion,The way is cheat cuscomers actaully.Obviously,The merchant in order to profit,Utilies pretty appearance made the customer advent misunderstand that is good product.