单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。
My good friend is Lizhenzhen.She is a lovely girl.We are neighbors and since we started going school,we have been accomplished each other.She is kind and easy-going.You can impossibly feel uneasy with her.I like her very much and we enjoyed the time with each other. I hope we can be friends forever.