小学英语一年级作文：Clocks

文章衔接手法恰当；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；简单句有点多，从句数量使用不足。

Last sunday , I was invited to Brown's famliy.The family was so nice and I was enjoying myself all the time at their home.I found a clock hanged on the wall of their hall at lunch.It was very big,and it was oval .It had three cursors.It looked like a smile cat face.It was so funny that I couldn't help myself to laugh when I saw it.