文章衔接手法恰当;从句不足,简单句比重高;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了。
Last sunday , I was invited to Brown's famliy.The family was so nice and I was enjoying myself all the time at their home.I found a clock hanged on the wall of their hall at lunch.It was very big,and it was oval .It had three cursors.It looked like a smiling cat face.It was so funny that I couldn't help myself to laugh when I saw it.