句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
I have had a busy day! On the moring,after having breakfast,i helped my mother with the housewok.Then i started to do my homework.It is very interesting,so i do it well.On the afternoon,i went to play tennis with my friend.On the night,i watched tv for a little time and prepared myself for the next day's lesson. It is a busy day and i feel very content with myself!