小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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My dog Dudu has been nine years old.He is chubby and he wears a yellow coat.He is very lovely!I love him. He is also very cute.Once he was lost,after three days ,he could find the way to go home.My familiesare all very surprised. I like Dudu.He is not only a dog but also a friend of mine.