字数:200满分:100分
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Emerging in the cartoon is an information scene that the defender have see himself so tightly, while another ticker of football reckon his rival too stronger. Appearently, they are unconfident when they face up to difficultly. It is deeply rooted in the mind of general public that self-confidence is a vital merit of individuals. But in this public view still the truth? Cases against this opinion are abundant but this one Will suffice. It is not surprise to see one stand on stage for a speech can't impress a right meaning with a sentence just because nervous. Evidently, some individuals now already lost self-confidence in daily life. this problem is a disadvantage to their development. I ever face the same situation too. Already i have put an end to this problem. As a experienced person, I reckon we ought to more trail in the everyday life to improve our confidence.