2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(79):良好的师生关系

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；文中部分从句用的很不错，但句子错误有点多了；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

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