文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;作者高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇丰富度要加强;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用。
Furthermore, it makes sense to worry about the potential risks that policy cycle may bring to modern society. Firstly, a few policy cycle model is inflexible and very ‘rational’ giving rise to various problems and finding itself a difficult position. Secondly, no reasons justify this rough-and-tumble procees in the cycle which arouse the dispute so that frequently changing in new and sequential phases and unscrutability ways. For example just like (‘zig-zags’ go through the cycle)
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