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Furthermore, it makes sense to worry about the potential risks that policy cycle may bring to modern society. Firstly, policy cycle model is inflexible and very ‘rational’ giving rise to various problems and finding itself a difficult position. Secondly, no reasons justify this rough-and-tumble process in the cycle which arouses the discussion so that frequently changing in new and sequential phases and inscrutability ways. For example just like (‘zig-zags’ go through the cycle)
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