2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As the chart suggesting:people with a doctoral degree earn about 1550 dollars weekly on average, almost three times as those with less than a high school diploma.It is obviously conveying that:the higher degree you obtain,the more money you will earn. There are diverse reasons accounting for this phenomenon.In the first place, people with a high degree are regarded as those who have solider knowledge and broader horizon,which contribute vastly to their career.Additionally, people with a high degree,mostly have wider social relationship,which will in turn account for higher-paid work.Last but not least, From my point of view, the more education will benefit me more, not only can improve my competition in job hunting, but can also furnish my mind, enrich my life.