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文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear Su Qin, I am writing the letter for the purpose of expressing my apology for not having invited you to my birthday party held yesterday. You know,as one of my best pals,it is impossible for me not to give you an invitation.I did list you as one of the guests who should come to congratulate my birthday.It purely happened by chance.As I should go shopping for the party,I asked my sister to give every one of you a phone call to come.But she was not familiar with you and mistook for another person whose name was similars to yours. Please accept my heartfelf apology again.I hope to obtain your forgiveness for my carelessness. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
