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Dear Su Qin, I am writing the letter for the purpose of expressing my apology for not having invited you to my birthday party held yesterday. You know,as one of my best pals,it is impossible for me not to give you an invitation.I did list you as one of the guests who should come to congratulate my birthday.It purely happened by chance.As I should go shopping for the party,I asked my sister to give every one of you a phone call to come.But she was not familiar to you and mistook for another person whose name was similar to yours. Please accept my heartfelf apology again.I hope to obtain your forgiveness for my carelessness. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
