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Some policymakers do not enjoy making suitable decisions has caused problems. For example, face of major crisis (global warming, pollution, food crisis) brought bad consequence to the society which desroty social bonds and social sustainability. Furthermore, on condition that a huge revolution or policy change is more difficult than policy stability, people might require the special factors influencing that facilitate change.
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