2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句的使用；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

Some policymakers do not enjoy making suitable decisions has caused problems. For example, face of major crisis (global warming, pollution, food crisis) brought bad consequence to the society which makes away with social bonds and social sustainability. Furthermore, on condition that a huge revolution or policy shift is more difficult than policy consistency, people might require the other elements moving in a good direction.