文中从句数量不足;作者高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇丰富度要加强;语句间的衔接不是很自然。
In short, from a political standpoint john kingdom summarizes the three stages or streams relate to in policy change. Firstly, People should make a concrete analysis of each question (the problem stream) the problem stream inclusive the inconsistencies and potential problems that arise to the policy change. For example, analysis the a shift in criteria or magnitude of the event arouses public concern but most of people can not fully aware of the importance of matters in coomon peopel,s life. Secondly, the effectiveness of reliable solutions (the policy stream), use effective policy solutions can help political leaders resolve the issues much more smoothly.
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