从句使用量不足,应增加从句和复合句的使用;文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活;语句间的衔接不是很自然。
In short, from a political standpoint john kingdom summarizes the three stages or streams relate to in policy change. Firstly, People should make a concrete analysis of each question (the problem stream) the problem stream inclusive the inconsistencies and potential problems that arise to the policy change. For example, analysis the a shift in criteria or magnitude of the event arouses public concern but most of people cannot fully aware of the importance of matters in common peopel,s life. Secondly, the effectiveness of reliable solutions (the policy stream), use effective policy solutions can help political leaders resolve the issues much more smoothly.
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