2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? Chinese parents bound up in doing everything for their chirdren,including chirdren's habbits and the shool,even the person which their chirdren marry with.The phenomenent consists in China before thousnds of years,though the problem decreases with the social's development,the problem stiil exists. To make children alone,there are some ideas.On one hand,parents should cultivate children to do some things which they can do from young age.Besides,parents should not protect them from any hurt,they must have some hard experience.On the other hand,perents should let children travel alone one times at least before your children get marry. In a conclution,children will fly until they grow up,and parents must teach them the skills which they need.