文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Yan Yufei, I am looking forward to your visit eagerly.Just imagine:after all five years of writing to each other,we will finally have the chance to meet however,I am sorry that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive.The reason is that I will have to send my children to school that morning. Please wait for me in the arrival lounge.You can have breakfast there while waiting.By the way,as we have never met,I must tell you how to recognize me.I am of medium height and have a small moustache.In addition,I will be carrying a copy of the morning newspaper tucked under my left arm. Please forgive me for my untimely reception.I look forward to our meeting. Yours truly, Zhang Wei
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