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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:15浏览次数:7002
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中考马上要结束了,考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是David,你的美国笔友Fred来信询问考后你想做什么。请给他写封回信,告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情,并说明理由。
注意:1. 60词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息;
3.不要把已给出部分再抄写在答题卡上。


Dear Fred,
I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
_________________________________
Yours,
David
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富。

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Kingdon also proposes that solitary streams confluence in the key segment furnish a window of occasion with regard to policy change: if drawing attention of the issues or taking place during the stream will have a case, windows will unbolt. Consequently,schedule is created taking place the political fields which shaped by the three streams. Meanwhile, policy entrepreneurs preside over gear up major people to noteworthy but also these questions are conjoined with the solutions to political arena in order to shape a new plan of action to seek a practicable resolution. Namely, try experimenting with combinations of the three streams to get the functionality that people want will obtain the best result about policy change. For instance, political view unites with vote will cause meaningful change on policy agenda as well as organizational strength.

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