高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown last year I went to my hometown,to my surprised ,great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past,here is full of green trees and wild flowers. The fish was swimming in the river outside the village .The people of our hometown lived in a shabby house,but lived happily,when the sun raise,they went to work and the sun down ,went to rest. Now that the road is wide, everywhere is shopping mall.People have become richer ,but the sky is not blue and the water is not clean.The sewage made in factory was poured into the river,so fish was killed.Environment has been destroyed. Control environment is the most important work.I also want to see the beautiful hometown.