2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hi! Welcome to my hometown,dear friends! I want to introduce some good places to you if you interested. First, haizhu park is the most popular place in haizhu.There are many beautiful flowers and trees in there. You can see the lake,and listen the birds to sing. Ofcourse, the amazing thing is boat,beacause we are able to boat while see the view.And then,if you like shoppiing, the zhengjia square is the best place to go. All kinds of goods you can buy in the there.Finally,i have to recommend a place that we can eat the delicious snack.It nearly my house,so if you don't mind,i am pleasure to eat with you.That's all, have a good time in my hometown.