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As we know, it is not wisdom that you come to a conclusion when you see or listen anything.Because it is not really truth when someone do that on purpose.In addition,sometimes you may judge incorrectionly.In order to adviod this codition,we should think before you speak.As long as you are able to do that and make sense ,you are right.
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