高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I used to live in my hometown which a lot of trees arounded. Water was very clean and many fishes swam under water. The houses were old and streets were very narrow. People worked hard but poor. But now,most tall buildings have been built and many cars lay on the street. Due to the industrial development ,the envirionment became bad. Fishes disappeared and trees reduced. Therefore,we must take attention to and manage the pollution at once.