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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6301
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

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With the the society developed rapidly, we use communication method rather than communicate face to face, which cause terrific influence for us. Because we pefer to use Wachat, QQ and Weibo. It is very convenient for us to share our life, but we couldn't believe stranger even some friends. Sometimes, we couldn't help old man because they maybe blackmail us. It is bad for society,which will make us to lose trust at all society. So we should consider it what we can do it, which we build a harmonious society. In my opinion, we should maintain trust. Whoever meet trouble, we would like to be helped by kindness people. As long as you try your best to help other people, you will get a help when you are in trouble. Not only make us better, but also we could achieve our aim that we will build harmonious society. In a word, we should maintain trust.

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