题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用。
With the society developed rapidly, we use communication method rather than communicate face to face, which causes terrific influence for us. Because we prefer to use Wachat, QQ and Weibo rather than face to face. It is very convenient for us to share our life, but we couldn't believe stranger even some friends. Sometimes, we couldn't help the old man because they maybe blackmail us. It is bad for society, which will make us lose trust at all society. So we should consider it that we can do it, which we build a harmonious society. In my opinion, we should maintain trust. Whoever meets trouble, we would like to be helped by kind people. As long as you try your best to help other people, you will get a help when you are in trouble. Not only make us better, but also we could achieve our aim that we will build a harmonious society. In a word, we should maintain trust.