英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6332
要求:

题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the society developed rapidly, we use communication method rather than communicate face to face, which causes terrific influence for us. Because we prefer to use Wachat, QQ and Weibo rather than face to face. It is very convenient for us to share our life, but we couldn't believe stranger even some friends. Sometimes, we couldn't help the old man because they maybe blackmail us. It is bad for society, which will make us lose trust at all society. So we should consider it that we can do it, which we build a harmonious society. In my opinion, we should maintain trust. Whoever meets trouble, we would like to be helped by kind people. As long as you try your best to help other people, you will get a help when you are in trouble. Not only make us better, but also we could achieve our aim that we will build a harmonious society. In a word, we should maintain trust.

会员评论0个评论)
老子就是不服气
金币:24

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:89.01907087860

人气:41发布:2013-06-07

得分:89.0北冥流觞

人气:59发布:2013-11-17

得分:89.0AmandaAi

人气:39发布:2014-04-10

得分:89.0tanyangyang

人气:10发布:2016-06-07

得分:88.0Kisara

人气:66发布:2013-06-20