作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
It's not wise to come the the conclusion as we just touch the surface of a thing. What we see, or what we hear, we can't say we'v make it out because we'v not do any investigation for it so we don't know if it's true. If you easily believe something as you just know a little about it, you're not responsible for yourself. Only when we go deep into the question can we make the conclusion rely on our own judgements. Or we may misunderstand something or somebody that may cause a big damage. We see, we hear, and we have the ability to search what is the truth and what is decietful. It's our duty to find out what the world is to keep us on the way toward truth.
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