可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
It's not wise to come to the the conclusion as we just touch the surface of a thing. What we see, or what we hear, we can't immediately say we'v make it out because we'v not do any investigation for it so we don't know if it's true. Only when we go deep into the question can we make the conclusion rely on our own judgements. Or we may misunderstand something or somebody that may cause a big damage.As far as I'm concerned, if you easily believe something as you just know a little about it, you're not responsible for yourself. In a word, we have the ability to search what is the truth and what is decietful. It's counts a lot to find out what the world is to keep us on the way towards truth.
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