文中用词稍显贫乏;文中从句的数量太少;文章上下文衔接自然。
My house is very big and bright.It has got four rooms--the hall,living room,study room ,bedroom ,kitchen and bathroom.There are two computers in the living room and a computer stands on a table in front of the sofa. The bedroom is small,but it is very cozy,and a photo of mine hangs on the wall.What a lovely house I live!