语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇需继续加强,拼写检查要重视。
Nowadays many people form the habit of making the conclusion immediately once they looked or listened something. Whereas we all know that's wrong, there have many problems if we do it like this. As we all know, if we want to get the true conclusion about some events or some things else need spent a lot of times exploring and thinking, careful consideration and eventually get the answer.If we like this just look and listen may have some problem, because our eyes sometimes will cheat us on occassion and listen from others usually is untrustworthy no one know the ture just listenling form another by another. In my opinion, the best way to make a conclusion truly is nonstop to explore and observe under a large number of evidence then we will get it.Therefore, in our daily life we should keep sense while deal with something.
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