语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;作者句法基础较为扎实。
Nowadays many people form the habit of making the conclusion immediately once they looked or listened something. Whereas we all know that's wrong, there are some problems if we do it like this. As we all know, if we want to get the true conclusion about some events or some things else need spent a lot of times exploring and thinking, careful consideration and eventually get the answer.If we like this just look and listen may have some problems, because our eyes sometimes will cheat us on occasion and listening from others usually is untrustworthy no one knows the true just listening form another by another. In my opinion, the best way to make a conclusion truly is nonstop to explore and observe under a large number of evidences then we will get it. Therefore, in our daily life we should keep sense while deal with something.
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