语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足。
Nowadays many people form the habit of making the conclusion immediately once they looked or listened something. Whereas we all know that's wrong, there are some problems if we do it like this. As we all know, if we want to get the true conclusion about some events or some things else need spent a lot of times exploring and thinking, careful consideration and eventually get the answer. If we like this just looked and listened may have some problems, because our eyes sometimes will cheat us on occasion and listen from others usually is untrustworthy no one knows the true just listened form another by another. In my opinion, the best way to make a conclusion truly is nonstop to explore and observe under a large number of evidences then we will get it. Therefore, in our daily life we should keep sense while deal with something.
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