2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

文中词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication Nowadays ,with the development of technology and science ,the Internet have become widely used .It indeed increases our work efficency.But someine hold the idea that it occupied our time with the real world.Here are the opinions of mine . We can't deny the conveniences brought by the Internet for us .On the Internet ,we can communicate with people at any time and any place we want .Time and space is not the limitation of communication.Moreover,we can change views with our colleagues on the Internet efficiently.It revolute the way company operates. However ,on the other hand ,the Internet holds back the desire that we talk to our friends and families face to face.Accustomed to communicating on the Internet ,we prefer to talk with the mobilephone rather than mouth.In the course of time,we will loss the ability of talking to people directly. On the point of myself,I think the Internet is only a tool ,what matters to us is our own real life .So,it's more significant that we talk witn mouth in our daily life.