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Honorable teacher and fellow students.I am Sandy ,a junior majoring in secretary.It is my honor to stand here to make you a speech.My topic is "Believe and beyong yourself". There is a famous saying goes"Attitude is altitude".It shows that it is our attitude determines wheather we can overcome the difficulties we meet and succeed in whatever we want to do. There are many examples can prove that,such as Beethoven,whostill could create rousing symphopy.Stephen Hawking,suffering from complete paralysis but achieved a great achievement in phsycis.Recently,he opens the sina weibo to communicate with Chinese people.But who I am going to introduce to you is a woman director .I bet most of you have heard about a TV serial "Fleet of time" whose Chinese name is "匆匆那年“.The way of becoming a director is really tough.When she annouced that she wanted ro be a director,nearly nobody support her.Her parents forced her to give up and even her teacher implied her that she had no gift on it.However,she fighted with all those doubt and negativity from others.She chose to follow her heart and believe her ownself,stuggling really hard.After 7 years of efforts,she got paid.A few short films she made got prize and reconigtion.Later,she was invited to direct the 匆匆那年,which means that she becomes a professional director.And,today,an inspirational moive she directed,"Yesterday once more" which was written by a famous writer "刘同“was released.
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