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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):交流学生

发布时间:2014-11-27 10:48浏览次数:1156
要求:
假设你是李华,作为交流学生去了美国新奥尔良市(New Orleans)学习生活了一年。在此期间,你住在Brown夫妇家中,他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请你给他们写一封感谢信,主要内容如下:
◆表示感谢
◆表达感受
◆欢迎来访
◆保持联系
注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。


April 10
Dear Mr.and Mrs.Brown,
I'm writing to you from my home in China.
______ ______  ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ _
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

作者词汇基本功很好,一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,不过要注意词汇拼写的检查;文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

Honorable teacher and fellow students.I am Sandy ,a junior majoring in secretary.It is my honor to stand here to make you a speech.My topic is "Believe and beyond yourself". There is a famous saying goes"Attitude is altitude".It shows that it is our attitude determines wheather we can overcome the difficulties we meet and succeed in whatever we want to do. There are many examples can prove that,such as Beethoven,who still could create rousing symphony after losing his hearing.Stephen Hawking,suffering from complete paralysis but achieved a great achievement in phsycis.Recently,he opens the sina weibo to communicate with Chinese people.But who I am going to introduce to you is a woman director .I bet most of you have heard about a TV serial "Fleet of time" whose Chinese name is "匆匆那年“.The way of her becoming a director is really tough.When she announced that she wanted ro be a director,nearly nobody supported her.Her parents forced her to give up and even her teacher implied her that she had no gift on it.However,she fighted with all those doubt and negativity from others.She chose to follow her heart and believe her ownself,struggling really hard.After 7 years of efforts,she got paid.A few short films she made got prize and reconigtion.Later,she was invited to direct the 匆匆那年,which means that she became a professional director.And,today,an inspirational moive she directed,"Yesterday once more" which was written by a famous writer "刘同“was released.

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