2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。

Quite a few cargoes consist in a excessive packaging phenomenon nowadays,what causes that ,different people have different views. Some people think it is a means to gain profits for business,others argue that it stands for a phenomenon that the need is more than the provided.As far as I'm concerned ,with the development of the society,more and more people purse the quality of their life ,as a result of which ,they excessively purse the cargoes' packaging,which causes the phenomenon.However,it will bring the mass for the market if not postponed.To postpone the phenomenon,the government should have a standard for all cargoes.