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Quite a few cargoes consist in an excessive packaging phenomenon nowadays,what causes that ,different people have different views. Some people think it is a means to gain profits for business,and others argue that it stands for a phenomenon that the need is more than the provided.As far as I'm concerned ,with the development of the society,more and more people purse the quality of their life ,as a result of which ,they excessively purse the cargoes' packaging,which causes the phenomenon.However,it will bring the mass for the market if not postponed.To be free from the phenomenon,the government should have a standard for all cargoes.