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Great wall is only one in the world, if you destroy it, it never come back. your graffiti is nothing to everyone and even to yourself. you can't destroy great wall for your a moment of happiness. the manegement office of juyongguan section provides fake Great Wall brick to visitors for carving their names or others they like on it by paying. it is a wise think. it can provide protection for Great Wall through these money and the activity. vistors also make themselves satisfied. meanwhile they can bring souvenir home. but the payment for the brick must be considered carefully. the decided price make visitors acceptable. the brick must be simulation and good quality. what? make fake Great wall, How foolish. I oppose. it is too expennsive. the visitors pay out, but can't have left memory about this visiting. i think that fake Great Wall brick is great.