小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。

my grandfather, who is a fairly benign person, pays his love and priority to me off and on. Once upon a time, I made a mistake in doing homework, then, here by my side, he tried helping me do with the problem and strove for the right answer, though he had not opportunity to study in school when he was a child. When I went to street with him, he will always buy me some snack or notebooks for doing homework, we also have some fun in the park, with elevating a kite, doing exercise and so forth. He is so nice a man for whom I really show respect and adoration.