增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
It was Sunday and I didn't go to school. I was happy at home . After I had a breakfast, I helped my mother do some housework. Then I finished my homework at the room. I played the pinpang with my father. And I watched TV at night. What a wonderful day!