作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear Yan Yufei, I am looking forward to your visit eagerly.Just imagine:after all five years of writing to each other,we will eventually have the chance to meet however,I am sorry that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive.The reason is that I will have to send my children to school that is an English seminary that morning when you arrive at our city. Please wait for me in the arrival lounge which is a very good place to rest.You can have breakfast there while waiting.By the way,as we have never met,I must tell you how to recognize me.I am of medium height and have a small moustache.In addition,I will carry a copy of the morning newspaper tucked under my left arm. Please forgive me for my reception that cannot meet you timely.I look forward to our meeting. Yours truly, Zhang Wei
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