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托福独立写作模拟题:在母语国学习外语

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:24浏览次数:516
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question: Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages of each and support your viewpoint.
题干讲解
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 在母语国学习外语可以更好的把握口语化的表达。
2、 在母语国家学习外语还可以通过系统的阅读渠道提高自己的外语能力。
用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

I totally agree that one should learn a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. From my own experience, I have learned English for over ten years, and during my education for mater's degree, I have read over thousands of English articles, but I could not and have little confidence to speak out English with others, even with Chinese. And I sometimes have trouble to write English sentences which express my thought exactly. So, in my thinking, it does little help to improve my foreign language simply by reading. To learn a foreign language, we should involve in a language atmosphere and use it every day. On the other side of the leaf, there is much inconvenience to live in a foreign country in order to learn a foreign language. One has to leave his home, stuck in a totally unfamiliar culture and spend more money. But all of these will be worthy, since we are young, we should learn more cultural differences and extend our horizon; and we have enough time to earn our living by ourselves. What's more, to learn a language by everyday practising and systematic reading, our foundation would be quite solid that benefits us through our whole-life. If I have any chance to learn a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken, I will not have any doubt to take it.

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