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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用。
Happiness is the treasure we all desire. Often we pay all our life in seeking for happiness, but actually we do not know what it really means. Some people support by claiming that happiness is the absence of problems. In their opinion, what they pursue is a smooth life, without any accidents. Meanwhile, there are some people, especially young men, who are used to decline to take up challenges.
