拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文中衔接词丰富。
Happiness is the treasure we all desire. Often we pay all our life in seeking for happiness, but actually we do not know what it really means. Some people support by claiming that happiness is the absence of problems. In their opinion, what they pursue is a smooth life, without any accidents. Meanwhile, there are some people, especially young men, who are used to decline to take up challenges. In my point of view, the secret to happiness is to keep setting yourself new challenges. We improve ourselves in the ability to deal with all the problems in our life, and then get the sense of achievement.