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2012年7月7日雅思大作文真题:广告对消费者的影响

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:53浏览次数:3963[网页划词已开启]
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【题目要求

Advertising encourage people to buy in quantity rather than promoting its quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目分析

老题。广告出题种类两种,一种为大范围的(易写),如广告的好与坏;一种为考察细节的(难写),如来自竞争公司的广告对消费者的影响,而此次考试属于后者。所以大家要加强审题练习。
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高级词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;能够使用一些不错的从句。

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Today, many people are becoming convinced that advertising is more concernd with encourging bulk perchases than with encouraging prodution the quality goods through competition. Generally, advertising can be viewed from two standpoints. one is that it is primarily concerned with getting people to purchase items they usually would not otherwise buy. the other one is that it continous to inform consumers, thereby promoting competition between producer and service provider, there is truth lies somewhere between the two. many kinds of advertising clearly nowadays encourage a large purchases, in particular with offering the

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