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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文章用词灵活多样，但单词拼写错误较多；很好的运用了从句，同时句法错误极少。
With the development of economic these days, people's willingness to goods has significantly rising, therefore, adverting has involved in our daily life. yet people claim that advertisment may encourage people to be same individual as others. The reason for this trend may involve the recognisation that advertisment employ pop stars to advertise their products, which probably lead the fans chasing behind those celebrities blindly. Advertising in more concerned with encourge bulk purchase on the purpose of promoting competition, offering a large containers at low cost, or through offering susbtantial discounts for pruchasing several of the same products at once, will atttact consumer aim at same products. on the other hand, adult consumers generally have strong judgment as to what they need or don't need. they have a clear perspective of what can be used neccessrily, due to the restriction of their disposable income, not according to charming advertising. such advertising as Audi R8, but people will not simply go for it due to the advertising. To conclude, I believe that consumers should take their personal preference into consideration when purchasing an item, not just follow any trend blindly.
