小学英语一年级作文：Clocks

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

There is a clock in MR. Brown's house. It calls musical clock. It was made in Shanghai. The clock was bought by Mrs. Brown two years ago. They keep it in the living room. The clock is round and small. It is on the wall.When the clock strikes twelve, the clock will sing a song. MR. Browns all like it.