小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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There is a photograph of Jim's family. Jim's father MR.Brown is on the right of the photograph. He is very smart and working at a lawyer's office. He gets a good salary. Jim's mother MRS. Brown is very beautiful.She always stays at home and does housework. Jim is a handsome boy. He is a student. MRs Brown and his wife love Jim, and Jim love his parents too.